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Habla mucho, pero dice nada. ou pala ampil main ou pas dit anyin
Your complaints about Haitian males are so broad in scope that it is difficult for anyone to understand what you try to convey.

When you are writing, every word you use should be pregnant with meaning.

It is what the call economy of words.That means, if you write a thesis in 300 words and if you could rewrite it in 30 words or less without loosing the essence of what you try to say, then the 30 words thesis will be better writing than the 300 word thesis.

Writing is not easy for 80% of people world wide.
Allows me to recommend you the following books if you want to improve your communication skills:
The Elements of Style by William Strunk, E. B. White.

The Art of Styling Sentences by Ann Longknife, PhD.
The Art of Plain Talk by Rudolf Flesch, PhD
The Story of Language by Mario Pei.
Roget's International Thesaurus Fourth Edition or the latest
Reverse Dictionary by Theodore M. Bernstein Third printing or the latest
Merrian Webster's Collegiate Dictionary Tenth Edition or the latest.

Forbidden American English by Richard A. Spears.

Dictionary of American slang.

pick the latest
French idiomatic expressions
English idiomatic expressions
Greck and Latin roots
English Haitian Creole/Haitian Creole English:Word to Word Dictionary by Fequire Vilsaint; Jean Evens Berret.

The Dictionary of Misinformation by Tom Burman
Rider's Digest: Facts & Fallacies :Story of the Strange and Unusual
Petit Larousse Ilustre-buy the latest
Larousse Advanced Dictionary-New Edition French-English/Anglais -Francais,400,000 translation
The MACMILLAN VISUAL DICTIONARY UNABRIDGED COMPACT EDITION
Dictionary of Theories: One stop to more than 5,000 theories by Jennifer Bothamley
This partial list will not make you a Shakespeare or Corneille if you don't have the predisposition or talent to be a writer, but I am sure it will improve clarity and precision of your writing
By the way you could cancel your 04/07/2010 scheduled appointment with me at Kings County Hospital, so you could look for those books at Strand Books Store where you could find them at Bargain price.

You may look at Amazon.com also.
By the way I congratulate you Mireille, Tiba,the Avenger revenger, Linda,Cheval noire, Kiki,Lucas, Magloire,Nadege, Linglinsou,Maitre minuit, and all of you that take time to write about Haiti on this blog.You are intellectual giants in comparison to what the Dominican the so called civilized are writing on their blogs about themselves and the Haitians.

Follow links:
dominicantoday.com/dr/forum/domini...

Good luck
Your servitor
Dr. Feel Bad
Self appointed Psychiatrist in chief on Preval blog.

Dr. Feel Bad, April 3 2010, 8:44 PM

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